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#Poetry ‘Last Moments Of Love’ by Fiza Pathan

December 13, 2013 By insaneowl 5 Comments

Last Moments Of Love

By Fiza Pathan

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Last moments pass away like a slide in the springtime garden,

Your acidic words of hate have upset the sparrows in their nests.

My heart has been broken in three parts-one for me, one for cupid and the last fleshy bit for you

Last moments glide like an aimless cloud in the sky so blue,

You left me without an explanation you severed the tie.

My heart has been abused by three words-love, hate and infatuation

Last moments cry through this night of fire blazing,

You caught me in your net and now after my gills have been weaned from me, you want me to go,

My heart has been judged wrongly by three judges-the hag, the society and lastly O my love it’s you.

Last moments pass into the cauldron of fantasy,

You said you would always be there before the night would stalk me home.

My heart has been misused by the three fates but, there is one more thorn to their needle’s stitch and that is your goodbye.

Copyright © 2013 by Fiza Pathan

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A link to my book on Amazon:

http://www.amazon.com/Treasury-Bizarre-Christmas-Stories-Pathan/dp/1481081764/

Filed Under: Poetry Tagged With: Fiza Pathan, poetry

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  1. Athenas Take says

    December 13, 2013 at 1:46 pm

    You caught me in your net and now after my gills have been weaned from me, you want me to go,….these lines are really wow, felt the pain and the constant suffering. If you are actually going through this I pray that you heal really quick and if its just a work of fiction the sweetie you are made for greatness.

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  2. Renard Moreau says

    December 16, 2013 at 11:52 pm

    [ Smiles ] This poem is truly lovely!

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    • insaneowl says

      December 17, 2013 at 12:50 am

      🙂 Thank you.

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  3. slingshotbaby69 says

    January 14, 2014 at 10:55 pm

    Masterfully written!~ GREAT JOB…

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    • insaneowl says

      January 14, 2014 at 11:16 pm

      Thank You. 🙂

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