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#Poetry ‘When You Were There With Me’ by Fiza Pathan

December 17, 2013 By insaneowl 6 Comments

When You Were There With Me

By Fiza Pathan


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When you were there with me, the breeze forgot to breathe itself over the evergreen trees

When you were there with me, for the briefest moment, I could count all the blood red drops that entered my aching heart

When you were there with me, I was speechless in a crowd of babble only silence could comprehend

When you were there with me, the earth seemed like heaven with a dash of pixie dust in my vacant stare

When you were there with me, I could never get enough of your voice resonating tenderly into my yearning ears

When you were there with me, the raven was a falcon and the sky was my ground upon which I glided into the night of magical feathers.

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But now you aren’t here anymore, so this poor soul has to linger with the tide that dashes upon the rocks of my heavy laden chest

Why did you have to go? No answers, no questions and no replies to my unearthly cry.

However much I try, your memory is still impaled within my body and the pain remains till my thoughts rot in the darkness

Blood flows from my cuts-yet I’m quiet as the dew that saunters towards the green leaf in the early hours of the morning.

You were my all-but you left me behind and now I sing to your reflection in my looking-glass eyes … the time is lost when you were with me.

Copyright © 2013 by Fiza Pathan

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Filed Under: Poetry Tagged With: Fiza Pathan, poetry

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  1. JP McLean says

    December 19, 2013 at 1:54 am

    Lovely, thank you.

    Reply
  2. Athenas Take says

    December 19, 2013 at 1:58 pm

    Romantic and painful, guess they both go hand in hand.

    Reply
  3. bushramuzaffar says

    December 26, 2013 at 12:43 pm

    Lovely!

    Reply
    • insaneowl says

      December 27, 2013 at 1:12 am

      THANK YOU.:)

      Reply
  4. Priyanka says

    December 28, 2013 at 12:48 pm

    Beautifully weaved 🙂

    Reply
    • insaneowl says

      December 29, 2013 at 12:45 am

      Thank you. 🙂

      Reply

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